your narratives are not bad... nice choice to include kid... however you need to be more specific about the particular bodies and the quality of the space. if we are going to talk about a young (growing) body and an old (aging) body...how are the received in the spaces? how do they perceive the spaces? what about the size of the rooms?
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your narratives are not bad...
nice choice to include kid...
however you need to be more specific about the particular bodies and the quality of the space.
if we are going to talk about a young (growing) body and an old (aging) body...how are the received in the spaces?
how do they perceive the spaces?
what about the size of the rooms?
i see what you mean.
i'll think about it.
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